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Louizane
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Louizane


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Join date : 2010-08-27
Location : where the wind blows...

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PostSubject: Louizane Tekkai   Louizane Tekkai EmptyFri Aug 27, 2010 8:22 pm

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Name: Louizane Tekkai
Alias/Nicknames: 'Volcanic Seizure' Lou
Age: 19
Job/Occupation: Shipwright
Affiliation: Pirate
Crew: -
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Personality: Calm; Giggles from once in a while. Serious and constantly reads books. Always pays attention when spoken too.
Birth date: -
Birthplace: Bomber Island; East Blue
Family/Relatives: Mother; Died in a ship crash accident - Father; never seen after Louizane's birth.
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Likes: Machinery; Interesting people; people that have a nice personality.
Dislikes: impunity; Marines; People with no pride
Hobbies: Creating stuff, desarming stuff and remaking them again! XD
Favorite Food: Seafood
Favorite Music: -
Special Skill: One of the fastest ship builder's known in her island.
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Appearance: Louizane Tekkai 1590528
Gender: Female
Height: 180 cm
Weight: 40 Kg
Blood Type: 0-
Body Type: Average
Character Strength: Moderate
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Biography: Bomber Island is an artificial Island. Created to be a pirate ship, it was abandoned when it got stuck with another island, making that one rumble, but stucking Bomber. Some people started to arrive at the Island and made it their homeland. after 35 years of the execution of Gol D. Roger, this island is home of scientist and Shipwrights. Babies borned in that island are introduced into learning how to make ships. Of course, Lou wasnt the exception. When she became 15 years-old, her mother died in a bomb, planted in the shipwright's main office. Not far from that day, meanwhile Lou was sitting on the beach, she saw a strange fruit laying on the sand. She took it, and felt hungry, so she munched it. It had a taste that couldnt be resisted! it was awful! She tried spitting it, with no success, and went back to the village as soon as she could. SHe didnt thell anyone about that incident, until a small pirate gang appeared and started to take kids from there homes with them to make them pirates. But, as soon as they landed, they saw Lou, and when they were about to grab her, she turned into ashes and went in an speedy way to warn everyone on the village. Everyone drived off the pirates and prized Lou. Now, with her being 19, set off one night in a small boat to explore the world and find out variable ways of creating ships.

Fighting Style: Turns her ash powers into fighting elements.
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RP Sample: Louzaine was headed towards the nothing. She was on her small rowboat, knowing that even the smallest wave could end her life do to her fruit's debility. She just letted her-self be taken away by the waves, She wasnt scare of food lack, she had plenty inside a small box. She just wanted to get away from that painful Island.
when she decided to take a nap, she bumped into something. Meanwhile getting up she saw that a giantic ship with a strange fish-like head was there. She wondered why she didnt noticed it before, but didnt really care and decended. She saw a lot of people going in; from marines to rich people, anyone was going inside that strange ship.
Suddenly, she snapped. she remebered her tutor at the ship class talking about a ship in the sea that was also a restaurant. She felt stupid as how she was examinating that place as if she had never heard of it before. She checked and saw she had enough money for a complete meal, checked the time and went into through the doors.


Last edited by Louizane on Sun Aug 29, 2010 1:29 am; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : Well, I hope this is enough.)
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PostSubject: Re: Louizane Tekkai   Louizane Tekkai EmptySun Aug 29, 2010 12:22 am

I like it, but I have seen a few problems. You only mentioned your mother in your relatives for one. Your special skill cannot be your fruit power for two. I'm also going to have to request an RP sample if you want your fruit for third. I want you to name at least three things in "Likes" "Dislikes" and "Hobbies" for fourth. And lastly, I want you to go into more detail in personality.

Sorry for the inconvenience, but thems the rules.
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PostSubject: Re: Louizane Tekkai   Louizane Tekkai EmptySun Aug 29, 2010 12:56 am

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PostSubject: Re: Louizane Tekkai   Louizane Tekkai EmptySun Aug 29, 2010 1:00 am

Look at Aden's RP sample in the spoiler. You don't have to be that long, or seperate it into combat/non combat. Just make it about 3 paragraphs long so I can see how your character interacts.
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PostSubject: Re: Louizane Tekkai   Louizane Tekkai EmptyTue Aug 31, 2010 4:17 pm

APPROVED~!
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