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Louizane
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PostSubject: Hai Hai no Mi   Hai Hai no Mi EmptyFri Aug 27, 2010 8:42 pm

Devil Fruit Name: Hai Hai No Mi (Ash Ash fruit)

Fruit's User: Louizane Tekkai

Type: Logia

Traits or Abilities Granted: Lets Lou turn into ash

Physical Appearance Changes (If Any): None.

Techniques:

Hai Hai no eruption: Joins both hands to create a whirlwind of ash. It has a 10 M range forward and a width of 5 M. Its not 'strong as', Its just strong enough to pull back a rock weight 1 Ton. But if that rock is hooked on to something larger the eruption wont work. It can work forever, but that would make Lou tired and vulnerable to damage. 3 posts as max.

cooldown: 3 posts

Hai Hai no spike: turns one or both hands into sharp spikes made out of ash. This spikes can alter shape, meaning they can stretch out to reach the target. This spike stays on as much as Lou needs. If this spike slashes through someone, it wont make blood come out or anything, but insert a small amount of ash particles in the foe's body. (1 or 2 mm square)

cooldown: 4 posts

Hai Hai no explode: Lou ducks and compresses all the ash in the ambience to explode in a blow that pulls back and damages sight. This attack makes a sphere with a radius of 50 M, and stays on for 4 posts. This creates Impaired vision and nullifies any sight of any living creature. Lou CAN see through the ash since she is ash (duh). in factm, she actually is the ash. She can create spikes to dash through the enemy (1 post cooldown) or just crush it by joining all the ash particles in the area (not to much, if not Lou cant handle it). But the serious side-effect is that if Lou attacks, she, for the rest of the battle cant use her techniques out of fatigue.

charge-up: 2 posts

cooldown: 5 posts

Hai Hai no division: creates 2 small versions of Lou that are half her stature (90 cm each) just as 2 small child versions of her. This dangerous attack is difficult to control since the 2 brains work as one, so on as every other organ, making it hard to cooperate. Also, this smaller versions have half the power than a normal attack created by Lou, but also half cooldown. This technique can last forever, but not recomended, since the amount of brain work that Lou has to make is doubled and can be serious. It can only be used for 3 posts. (for now Razz, Lou might get stronger and will be able to manage it better in the future)

cooldown: 10 posts + any attacks that are performed multiplied by 2.

Hai Hai no death whisper: For Lou to activate this technique she has to be close to her target, about 50 cm or less. she turns into ash and goes into the foe's mouth, ears and nose, Nulifying the ability to breath and so, killing the target. This is dangerous for Lou too, since she has to be close range to the foe as she is sending the ash in her victim. (NOTE: the ash that goes into the nose, mouth, etc. Are her hands, doing this, the rest of her body becomes vulnerable to any attack).
Charge-up: 2 posts
cooldown: 10 posts

Hai Hai no Kazan Iki: Lou disperses into the air small particles of ash that remain floating around both fighters UNLESS any wind is blown. The particles get 100 Meters away tops. then, they just spin slowly around both fighters. If lou needs aid, the particles drive into her body and slowly regenerate stamina (3 posts) or they can just drive up to the enmy to cut through its body, not damaging but leaving a small amout of ash in his body. Meanwhile the battle goes on the enemy slowly breathes ash into his body adding up in his blood.

Charge-up: 5 posts
use time: 7 posts
cooldown: 10 posts

(The attacks im about to post can only be activated when certain "ash hits" (AH, everytime the enemy gets attacked or inhales ash) are inside his body.

hai driller: the ash inside the enemy's body turn into small drills that hurt the enemy from the inside. this requires 10 AH to use.

cooldown: none, since this doesnt affect Lou at all.

Hai detonate: small explotions take place inside the enemy's body and damage any part within a 10 mm radious from the ash particle.

AH: 20

cooldown: -

Hai control: The ash goes up into the brain and makes the oponent sleep, stop moving by cutting nervous joints, alter his mood or just make the ash stay there in case of anything. Also, this ash can go to the muscles to alter the strenght of the enemy, up or down.

AH: 50

cooldown: 20 posts


Last edited by Louizane on Tue Aug 31, 2010 4:15 pm; edited 2 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Hai Hai no Mi   Hai Hai no Mi EmptySun Aug 29, 2010 2:03 am

The fact that it's a logia disturbs me...But I'll allow it under the circumstance that you explain an reasonable weakness.

The Eruption: How powerful and big is it? And it uproot an oak tree or lift a galleon from the sea and does it have a 10 cm radius or a mile? How long does it last?

The Spike: How long is it? Can it extend? How wide is it? How long does it last? DETAIL!

The Explosions: Again, how big? How powerful? How does it affect the surroundings (Complete darkness or impaired vision)?

The Division: How tall and wide are the clones? How long does this tech last unless you plan on this tech lasting as long as you want. If so, say so. Make sure you make a cool down. Also, when using this tech, I will only allow it if the cool downs are DOUBLED, not halved.

The Whisper: I will allow this tech only if you explain how close you need to be in order to do it and only if the opponent has TWO posts to stop you from doing so. I say two because Ash isn't a gas and will not choke someone right away, but will hinder their breathing.
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PostSubject: Re: Hai Hai no Mi   Hai Hai no Mi EmptySun Aug 29, 2010 11:56 am

Edited and added a few moves.
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PostSubject: Re: Hai Hai no Mi   Hai Hai no Mi EmptyTue Aug 31, 2010 3:57 pm

Well...Everything seems good, except for the fact that I asked for you to DOUBLE the cooldowns on the Division tech.
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PostSubject: Re: Hai Hai no Mi   Hai Hai no Mi EmptyTue Aug 31, 2010 4:15 pm

Oh no... I wrote it wrong... Ill correct it...
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PostSubject: Re: Hai Hai no Mi   Hai Hai no Mi EmptyTue Aug 31, 2010 4:16 pm

Alright.

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